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Nicholas Samuel Stember's avatar

I really enjoyed your story.

Alicia's avatar

It makes me super happy to hear that!! Thank you so much for reading it. ❤️

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

I love that story! 😁🖤 Alicia, you are a master storyteller! Such wonderful writing! I wish I could‘ve stayed a while longer with the guide! 🖤

The Legend of Lumani's avatar

This is such a vivid trance-vision, the moment your body turns into the ant guide's body genuinely gave me chills. I write African mythology-based epic fantasy myself, just posted a new chapter today, and I love how unfiltered and dreamlike this piece feels. More space antz please!

Alicia's avatar

Ooh, your work sounds really cool! I’ve subscribed and will be reading some of your writing going forward. Thank you so much for reading my story and for the lovely comment.❤️

The Legend of Lumani's avatar

Thank you for subscribing. It means a lot.

I enjoyed reading your work. Looking forward for moee

Jay Allen Ford's avatar

The moment the guide in white robes reveals his true form is truly amazing. Do you think this Ant Guide brought you to his home world for a special reason, or was he just sharing an ancient origin story written in the red-gold sand?

Alicia's avatar

My feeling at the time was that I was being shown the vastness of the universe beyond Earth, but also how it’s all connected (the Nazca lines on another planet). Thank you very much for reading!

Jay Allen Ford's avatar

That makes the vision even more powerful, Alicia. The idea of being shown not only the vastness beyond Earth, but the hidden connections running through it all, gives the piece a beautiful sense of awe.

The Nazca lines appearing on another planet is such a striking image—as if mystery itself is not confined to one world, but written across the universe in patterns we only partly understand. Thank you for sharing that glimpse.

Alicia's avatar

I really appreciate your comment, Jay!! These are the comments that spark up my day.⚡

Jay Allen Ford's avatar

Alicia, that makes my day too. Thank you.

I love when a piece opens a door into something larger, and yours did that beautifully. The image of those patterns stretching beyond Earth stayed with me. I’m grateful I got to step into that vision for a little while.

Holly's avatar

Well I absolutely loved that

Alicia's avatar

Ah, thank you so much!! ❤️

I Can Only Give You Everything's avatar

That was a trip! Loved the ending .

Alicia's avatar

Thank you so much for reading! Very glad you enjoyed it.

Gan's avatar

a visitor to the strange discovers they belong to it. Maybe we all belong to a strange truth. For a future story, I’d love to see what you do with a lighthouse on a planet with no ocean.

Alicia's avatar

My first prompt suggestion!! I’m so excited. Yes, I will do a meditation on this and post it. Thank you so much!

𓏸𓈒𓆡 Ocean Being 𓇼𓈒𓏸's avatar

Next write about eating an orange in the shower! Look at my last post for why 🤣

Alicia's avatar

Sadly, I can’t read text against a white background. What’s the gist of it?

𓏸𓈒𓆡 Ocean Being 𓇼𓈒𓏸's avatar

Showering with oranges lmao

Alicia's avatar

Mm, citrusy freshness!🍊

Path of the Guardian's avatar

LSD, Ayahuasca brilliance level descriptions !Thank you !

Alicia's avatar

That is a huge compliment! Thank you so much for reading it. 🐜