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Charlie Walls's avatar

Can't wait to read the next part and see what that hexagon is and why it's glowing

Alicia's avatar

There is a part 2, but I’m afraid it doesn’t really solve any mysteries…

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

I felt like I was actually there! 😁👍🏻

Alicia's avatar

That was my goal! Thanks so much, Sacha.

Hellish Views - Harry Evans's avatar

This definitely pulls you in

Alicia's avatar

Thanks! It was fun coming up with this one.

Hellish Views - Harry Evans's avatar

Atlantis is fascinating. I like your vision.

Pelle Martens's avatar

This has the feeling of standing in a busy crowd and suddenly realizing you've just witnessed the beginning of something important 😊🤭

Alicia's avatar

Exactly what I was trying to convey! Like, is that glowy thing what destroys Atlantis? What is that?! 😂 I don’t know…

Martin Fischer's avatar

This is a very atmospheric opening, with vivid imagery and a strong sense of an ancient, living world. The mysterious artifact at the end really caught my attention and makes me curious to see where the story goes next.

Alicia's avatar

Thank you so much for reading, Martin!! ❤️